Thursday, November 29, 2007

Argumentative Essay- Yovanny

Name: Yovanny Hernandez.

The age to drink is wrong!


Some people say that the age for a man to drink is 21 or higher, however some teenagers that are in the war fighting are under age and they can kill and been kill but they can't drink a lazy beer they go to war some of them come crazy and many of them never return because they die on battle and even when they are killing people and risking their lives they can’t drink alcohol.

The people say that the teenagers shouldn’t drink alcohol under age because they don’t know how to control their body, but they let teenagers drive and they let them kill peoples like what happening on Iraq and if they can kill a man They should be aloud to drink at list a beer.it doesn't seens fare that they can be send to war they can be kill in war and they can't drink a beer.

There are some mans on this country that tell their sons and daughers not to drink alcohol that sound right to me, but however there are some of them that say the same thing but they drink to so if you want your son to do what you want first do the example is no llke a verb I heard it sound much like this "do what I say no what I do" and it doesn't seens much fare to me.

Some people think that the teenagers Shouldn't be aloud to drink alcohol because the can't handle the effects of using alcohol like distorted vision hearing and coordination, but infact no man if it drinks can control him self and every body lose coordination and vision when they are drinking alcohol.

I don't think is fare That even when the teenagers that are fighting on Iraq return from the war they can't celebrate drinking a beer like many soldiers do with their partners and family because it is no fare that a some soldiers can drink but others doesn't.

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