Cold
The people say I'm cold as ice
That I'm bad like hell.
That I'm like a robot with no heart
That my heart is like a whole empty
I am a lion
I am a snake
I am a turtle
I am a scorpion
All the animals for a reason the lion violent
the snake poisonous
the turtle calm
the scorpion disloyal.
An animal
four
one per personality
dominant disloyal
powerful and poisonous
that my eyes tell you something
only by looking at you
all those characteristics in one body.
4 comments:
i think your poem is great... i see metaphore, simile, alliteration, persontication which is very good.
i like yoor poem it is nice and i can understand almost every you try to compared your self with animals =.
*_*Helo!!! nice poem.I like your poem.*_*
good poem....I like =)
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